i just came
Fucking sweet shizzle brah!
I didnt know I was so talented at making songs! :P
YOU ARE SO TALENTED MAN! U BE SO AWSUM
the idea is nice, but please make a proper song out of it!
the sound is nice, and the beat is ok too, but you need to make a lead voice, or at least more diversity
tell me if you ever make something new ;)
I kind of liked the simplicity of the pulsing brass but might develop it later too. will let you know!
a bit too... boring
and im afraid the lyrics dont inspire me either, the vocals just arent convincing musically, so the message doesnt get through either :(
but then again, this is goth, were supposed to be negative! low is good!
lol exactly... high ratings are conformist anyway :D
nice thing, but the bleepy sounds are really annoyaing, and i dont really see what they add to the song. the song is kinda boring to listen to in an active way, but as you said its great for passive listening, like during a game.
if you would get rid of the beeps at the start and perhaps do a little more with the team (2 or 3 more layers added throughout the song?), i would give you an 8 or a 9
for now, a 7 is enough ;) nice work, see my critisism as positive :)
the only problem is that i dont get the feeling that im getting any further through the song. i cant find a purpose, a nice solo, or perhaps vocals...
make it longer and get some leads in there and ill give it another look!
nice theme though ;)
Thanks man! i want to put vocals to it but i need someone who can sing well, and the lyrics that fit the theme at hand. seeing as this was one of my better songs, i will most certainly improve on it somehow!
Nice! ... i guess...
completely not my style, but it convinced me to give you a high score anyway ;)
i saw this a while ago and i thought; this must get out of the metal top and into the universal top30!
im glad to see you there now ;)
just awesome ;)
a very big 10 for this :D this song gives people an amazing feeling. the song tells a story, and thats awesome ;)
its a pretty nice idea! you asked for suggestions?
- the drums are a bit too loud compared to the melody in the first 30 seconds
- when the percussion stops (at 00:38), it feels really weird, you should create a better break
- the bell-like sound is awesome when it kicks in, maybe you can loop those and mix them a little
- a lead voice would be awesome, to create a real song instead of this background music
I loved the theme, so im looking forward to a new version with more in it! hope you find my ideas useful ;)
i'll fix it up a little bit. thank you <3
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