i just came
Fucking sweet shizzle brah!
I didnt know I was so talented at making songs! :P
i just came
Fucking sweet shizzle brah!
I didnt know I was so talented at making songs! :P
YOU ARE SO TALENTED MAN! U BE SO AWSUM
kinda fun
the idea is nice, but please make a proper song out of it!
the sound is nice, and the beat is ok too, but you need to make a lead voice, or at least more diversity
tell me if you ever make something new ;)
I kind of liked the simplicity of the pulsing brass but might develop it later too. will let you know!
hm...
a bit too... boring
and im afraid the lyrics dont inspire me either, the vocals just arent convincing musically, so the message doesnt get through either :(
but then again, this is goth, were supposed to be negative! low is good!
lol exactly... high ratings are conformist anyway :D
Nice theme...
the only problem is that i dont get the feeling that im getting any further through the song. i cant find a purpose, a nice solo, or perhaps vocals...
make it longer and get some leads in there and ill give it another look!
nice theme though ;)
Thanks man! i want to put vocals to it but i need someone who can sing well, and the lyrics that fit the theme at hand. seeing as this was one of my better songs, i will most certainly improve on it somehow!
Nice! ... i guess...
completely not my style, but it convinced me to give you a high score anyway ;)
cheeers :D
Genius
just awesome ;)
Nice start
its a pretty nice idea! you asked for suggestions?
- the drums are a bit too loud compared to the melody in the first 30 seconds
- when the percussion stops (at 00:38), it feels really weird, you should create a better break
- the bell-like sound is awesome when it kicks in, maybe you can loop those and mix them a little
- a lead voice would be awesome, to create a real song instead of this background music
I loved the theme, so im looking forward to a new version with more in it! hope you find my ideas useful ;)
i'll fix it up a little bit. thank you <3
Awesome ^^
This song has a great progression, it got me from the start! reminds me of things i experiment with on my keyboards... this is my kind of music, please submit more ;)
im not giving it a 10 because I expected a bit more from the melodies above the chords (EG vocals, leads, riffs...)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing your thoughts :)
Moah...
Gues im the only one here to not like this xD you have some great themes in the song, but IMHO there's way too much repetition. This would be a great song during a video game or a movie, but im getting kinda bored when I really listen to it...
its still a nice song, so Im gonna give it a 7, keep it up ;)
Thanks for listening! I'm sorry that you don't like it, but I'm happy that you can find something positive about it. :)
It Rocks :D
The rain sound kicks ass! well done ;)
Thanks! :D
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